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What the heck, I might as well. This is a poem I wrote about my "Dorothy."

MidLife in Kansas

The reek could not be erased
no matter how hard
Dorothy tried.
The smell of old dreams and unmade beds,
stale and musty, and oppressive
like the Kansas heat.

The old house was so horribly
in disrepair.
Baked and blasted by years of neglect,
it stood devoid of color.
Gray and mute,
a tombstone in a flat Kansas graveyard.

Some days only the dust seemed
to have life.
It hovered around her,
sometimes almost unseen,
other times it hung so thick and suffocating
that breathing itself
became another chore.

At night
in the stillness and the dark
Dorothy dreamed
of OZ.

Oh yes, long before the storm
Dorothy knew of OZ.
In the musings of a traveling man
she had seen such far away places.
And she sang of them.
And dreamed of a wizard.

It was Dorothy in the end
who called down the storm, bent it
to her wishes.
To destroy the house.
To splinter all of the old.
And carry her off
to OZ.

Where all things are possible.
And scarecrows dance,
and even the horses are in color.
Where she is adored
by munchkins.

Back in Kansas,
amid the debris,
only Auntie Em knew the truth of the storm.
And she thought of OZ
and remembered how the road to Hell
was paved
with yellow bricks.

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Very creative Mark ~ I liked this part the best:
"It was Dorothy in the end
who called down the storm, bent it
to her wishes.
To destroy the house.
To splinter all of the old.
And carry her off
to OZ."

I too wrote poems when I was in the deepest part of my MLC. I needed to express myself and this was the only avenue I had at the time. At least you can get a feel (I think) of how we feel sometimes. I'm in the process of writing some more for the different phase I am currently in.

October 3, 2007

Screaming within
Suffocation
What to do
Yell, Scream, Cry, Die
Why?

Tick, Tick, Tick
My clock goes
Like a bud about to burst into full bloom
Quench
Hide
Run
Stomped on and shrugged aside

Desires of others
Mine die
Screams within
Imprisoned by right and wrong
Imprisoned by my own words
Run, Run, fast as I can
Looking for quiet
Looking for me.



October 3, 2007

TODAY

T torture from within
O obsolete
D dismal
A anxious
Y yearning for something more




(Not sure exactly when I wrote these)

WHY?


Trying to forget
The things that drive me inside
Heart aches for what is and for what isn’t
Wondering, pondering, always deliberating
Torture, Suppression, Pessimistic behavior
Hate it, despise it
Want to run away
Run to nowhere, Run to somewhere
Martyr? Not. Victim? Self Inflicted.
Coward, Selfish, Despising my thoughts.




LOVE & LAUGHTER

Love and Laughter
What are they to me?
Faded ideas of something in a dream.
Sorrow, shame
Things I know well.
Fear, Anger, Jealousy and Rage.
Demons of those reside in my pain.
When will I know of the happiness so boldly spoken of by others?
When will I know love and laughter?




COMES AND GOES

Comes and Goes
My feelings of no time left
Laughing, smiling, like sprinkles of salt that makes
A dish palatable to ones senses
Gloom, fear, can’t catch my breath
Like infinite darkness with no ray of light.
Frantic desires, deep within me smoldering
Unquenchable, Scathing desperation
Screams to be released
Comes and goes…Laughing, Smiling, like sprinkles of salt.

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Mark54 and 40ANW....
Both of you have written really great poems...and the sense of emotion and metaphors come through.
thank-you for sharing

blessings and continue to enjoy the rainbows where they were intended to be enjoyed from; terra firma (solid ground. )

:)
~magdalene

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Magdalene....thanks so much for the kind comments.

Mark

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65 posts
Thank you Magdalene....have a wonderful weekend Laughing
Superstar - founder
1097 posts

WoW!  We have some very talented members here!  I am so proud of you guys/gals for using your creativity to express your emotions...writing can be one of the best outlets when things truly get difficult.  Please continue sharing your creativity!

Shepherdess

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Here is my soundtrack of some of my favorite songs and artists...check out the Remix for Summer Breeze.

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Thanks Shep!
Although mostly not my style of music, I enjoyed listening and especially the remix of Summer Breeze.
You're such a groovy lady!
If i knew how to do it; i'd try and throw a song on that has been a comfort for me to sing during this season.....

Take care~ magdalene

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